Tuesday, December 18, 2007

FATE

I jostled against the tide of time,
nothing is left in the journey of life.

things were thought differently,
never meant to go in such hurry.

I bleed to death with the appalling pain,
fighting to the last for what i have not gain.

Is this what is stored in my destiny,
half way through my life's journey.

expected so many avenues on the way,
but ended up like a seamless castaway.

5 comments:

  1. well written! but u cud hav surely added more...
    :)

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  2. well written mate but it needs some more flesh though

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  3. The content is beautiful and very nice :)

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  4. I feel you wanted to convey some more things , but made it shorter ..but guess you are out of it now !

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