Tuesday, September 23, 2008

poems The Dreamer..

The Dreamer..

by on in
I am lonely wanderer ,
in search of true friends.
I roam across places,
in search of happy souls.
I live in the world of dreams,
but I owe nightmares.
My past has been worse.
I think of a good future.
I am a dreamer,
with fake dreams
I think of day,
but world of darkness invites me.
I wish to be first,
but my path prevents me.
I am a thinker,
Just thinking apart from doing anything.
I am fake with nothing to do,
Sitting alone may not help.
I think of helpless friends,
who backstabbed me .
I am a lonely soul,
whining all the way .
I wish to grab gold,
but I fall back in the race.
My dreams are high.
reaching the zenith.
Dreaming wont help,
for once I decide not to dream.
life is short,
dreams are big,
learn to work hard with no dream.
Never give up ,
like a little sparrow.
Touch the sky,
which is so high.
But first make a try ,
and then you will fly
high in the sky.
By at
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33 comments:

  1. The Solitary Writer.September 23, 2008 at 10:40 AM

    this was written..... many years ago w+hen i was in school

    so its too simple like bachha sorts

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  2. ArjunSeptember 23, 2008 at 10:59 AM

    Feelings well put into words..That too u say it was long back... Gr8 work..
    But i feel, u got to dream... Wat's the meaning of 'sky limit' when u don't know wat it is....
    Hope i made sense..
    Anyway, keep posting..

    Cheers..!!
    Arjun

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  3. The Solitary Writer.September 23, 2008 at 11:05 AM

    ty

    touching the sky means becoming successful and moreover u w+ill be successful only if u work hard and put in efforts for the same

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  4. lukkydivzSeptember 23, 2008 at 11:09 AM

    lol u were a dreamer in school?
    And this u call bachcha sorts :O
    in scholl i dint know what nightmares, fake dreams and backstabber meant!

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  5. The Solitary Writer.September 23, 2008 at 11:15 AM

    hmm may be u wre poor in studies and i was extra ordinary...i wrote my first story at 13

    imagine ....u wud be anazed if u read it

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  6. The Solitary Writer.September 23, 2008 at 11:17 AM

    @ divya

    i was not a dreamer in school....may be i was ..... but the purpose of this poem is to stop dreaming and put in efforts to bring things and ur goals into pictures

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  7. RajeshSeptember 23, 2008 at 11:34 AM

    Dude....please don call it bacha sorts...actually good...too good considering the fact that u were a kid wen u actually wrote....good job...keep it up dude..

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  8. The Solitary Writer.September 23, 2008 at 11:36 AM

    hmm yeah i w+as a bachha then

    hehehehe

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  9. Mr.69September 23, 2008 at 11:38 AM

    good one !!

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  10. The Solitary Writer.September 23, 2008 at 11:40 AM

    ty mr 69

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  11. olimpiaSeptember 23, 2008 at 1:30 PM

    ...for sure you are a dreamer!it will help you change that world who unpromotes dreaming.....

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  12. AninditaSeptember 23, 2008 at 1:56 PM

    It may be simple but it touches the heart.. Really nice... :)

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  13. meSeptember 23, 2008 at 2:01 PM

    aww nice work!

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  14. The Solitary Writer.September 23, 2008 at 2:13 PM

    @ olimpia may be it happens so

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  15. The Solitary Writer.September 23, 2008 at 2:13 PM

    @ anindita

    ty for that ....

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  16. The Solitary Writer.September 23, 2008 at 2:13 PM

    @ me

    thanks a lot dear frnd

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  17. LenaSeptember 23, 2008 at 2:55 PM

    hi, saw your question on Sameera's blog.. thing is you used the wrong url
    put this one in header section

    http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/3600/imrrwragesga8.jpg

    Thats in case if Sami has not replied yet :)
    Else she will sure help you out

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  18. Preetilata【ツ】September 23, 2008 at 3:11 PM

    nice n lovely poem.
    many all ur dreams get fulfilled and u may touch d sky

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  19. ShrutiSeptember 24, 2008 at 4:22 AM

    it doesnt matter if u wrote it when u were a kid..
    what matters is the feelings u put in there...

    great touching work

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  20. aniSeptember 24, 2008 at 5:14 AM

    its really nice..

    n i agree with shruti.. doesnt matter when u wrote it..its all about the feelings that u have put in it..

    "Touch the sky,
    which is so high.
    But first make a try ,
    and then you will fly
    high in the sky."

    itss so true.. one always need to try..

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  21. The Solitary Writer.September 24, 2008 at 12:52 PM

    ty lena nw i got it

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  22. The Solitary Writer.September 24, 2008 at 12:52 PM

    ty preetilata

    so kind of u dear

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  23. The Solitary Writer.September 24, 2008 at 12:53 PM

    @ shruti yeah rightly said girl

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  24. The Solitary Writer.September 24, 2008 at 12:53 PM

    @ anila

    yup thats right and very much true

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  25. SanaSeptember 25, 2008 at 7:49 AM

    nice stephen.
    i luv writing poems too. a couple on my blog.

    cum to my blog sumtym?
    http://www.shipwrecklagoon.blogspot.com/

    see ya

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  26. The Solitary Writer.September 25, 2008 at 7:52 AM

    hey sana nice seeing u here

    yeah sure wud love to go to ya blog

    will visit for sure

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  27. Dan*September 25, 2008 at 9:02 AM

    rightly said

    Touch the sky,
    which is so high.
    But first make a try ,
    and then you will fly
    high in the sky.

    Visit your blog after a long ....... nothings changed except for the theme :)

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  28. The Solitary Writer.September 25, 2008 at 9:04 AM

    @ DAN TY DEAR


    NOTHING CHANGED LOL

    YEAH MAY BEE

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  29. SidrahSeptember 25, 2008 at 1:46 PM

    wow!!...lovely poem

    loved ur new template..its cool!! ^^

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  30. The Solitary Writer.September 25, 2008 at 1:48 PM

    ty sidrah

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  31. KartzSeptember 29, 2008 at 2:38 PM

    That was a good one bro'... Loved the ending. Reminds me of the following lines, my Prof's oft quoted saying-

    "Excellence is your watchword; the sky is your limit"

    a la the Indian Air Force. He coined it for them when he was part of the force.

    'Dreams will be high,
    The future is nigh,
    Have your goal in sight,
    And never give up without a fight!'

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  32. The Solitary Writer.September 30, 2008 at 10:30 AM

    yes i know thats true

    donno wht i was thinking the other day so penned it down

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  33. AnonymousMarch 21, 2010 at 7:49 AM

    I know you didnt know me when you wrote ths poem , but every word related to me !!! I wonder how you wrote ths ???

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