I am lonely wanderer ,
in search of true friends.
I roam across places,
in search of happy souls.
I live in the world of dreams,
but I owe nightmares.
My past has been worse.
I think of a good future.
I am a dreamer,
with fake dreams
I think of day,
but world of darkness invites me.
I wish to be first,
but my path prevents me.
I am a thinker,
Just thinking apart from doing anything.
I am fake with nothing to do,
Sitting alone may not help.
I think of helpless friends,
who backstabbed me .
I am a lonely soul,
whining all the way .
I wish to grab gold,
but I fall back in the race.
My dreams are high.
reaching the zenith.
Dreaming wont help,
for once I decide not to dream.
life is short,
dreams are big,
learn to work hard with no dream.
Never give up ,
like a little sparrow.
Touch the sky,
which is so high.
But first make a try ,
and then you will fly
high in the sky.
Tuesday, September 23, 2008
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this was written..... many years ago w+hen i was in school
ReplyDeleteso its too simple like bachha sorts
Feelings well put into words..That too u say it was long back... Gr8 work..
ReplyDeleteBut i feel, u got to dream... Wat's the meaning of 'sky limit' when u don't know wat it is....
Hope i made sense..
Anyway, keep posting..
Cheers..!!
Arjun
ty
ReplyDeletetouching the sky means becoming successful and moreover u w+ill be successful only if u work hard and put in efforts for the same
lol u were a dreamer in school?
ReplyDeleteAnd this u call bachcha sorts :O
in scholl i dint know what nightmares, fake dreams and backstabber meant!
hmm may be u wre poor in studies and i was extra ordinary...i wrote my first story at 13
ReplyDeleteimagine ....u wud be anazed if u read it
@ divya
ReplyDeletei was not a dreamer in school....may be i was ..... but the purpose of this poem is to stop dreaming and put in efforts to bring things and ur goals into pictures
Dude....please don call it bacha sorts...actually good...too good considering the fact that u were a kid wen u actually wrote....good job...keep it up dude..
ReplyDeletehmm yeah i w+as a bachha then
ReplyDeletehehehehe
good one !!
ReplyDeletety mr 69
ReplyDelete...for sure you are a dreamer!it will help you change that world who unpromotes dreaming.....
ReplyDeleteIt may be simple but it touches the heart.. Really nice... :)
ReplyDeleteaww nice work!
ReplyDelete@ olimpia may be it happens so
ReplyDelete@ anindita
ReplyDeletety for that ....
@ me
ReplyDeletethanks a lot dear frnd
hi, saw your question on Sameera's blog.. thing is you used the wrong url
ReplyDeleteput this one in header section
http://img219.imageshack.us/img219/3600/imrrwragesga8.jpg
Thats in case if Sami has not replied yet :)
Else she will sure help you out
nice n lovely poem.
ReplyDeletemany all ur dreams get fulfilled and u may touch d sky
it doesnt matter if u wrote it when u were a kid..
ReplyDeletewhat matters is the feelings u put in there...
great touching work
its really nice..
ReplyDeleten i agree with shruti.. doesnt matter when u wrote it..its all about the feelings that u have put in it..
"Touch the sky,
which is so high.
But first make a try ,
and then you will fly
high in the sky."
itss so true.. one always need to try..
ty lena nw i got it
ReplyDeletety preetilata
ReplyDeleteso kind of u dear
@ shruti yeah rightly said girl
ReplyDelete@ anila
ReplyDeleteyup thats right and very much true
nice stephen.
ReplyDeletei luv writing poems too. a couple on my blog.
cum to my blog sumtym?
http://www.shipwrecklagoon.blogspot.com/
see ya
hey sana nice seeing u here
ReplyDeleteyeah sure wud love to go to ya blog
will visit for sure
rightly said
ReplyDeleteTouch the sky,
which is so high.
But first make a try ,
and then you will fly
high in the sky.
Visit your blog after a long ....... nothings changed except for the theme :)
@ DAN TY DEAR
ReplyDeleteNOTHING CHANGED LOL
YEAH MAY BEE
wow!!...lovely poem
ReplyDeleteloved ur new template..its cool!! ^^
ty sidrah
ReplyDeleteThat was a good one bro'... Loved the ending. Reminds me of the following lines, my Prof's oft quoted saying-
ReplyDelete"Excellence is your watchword; the sky is your limit"
a la the Indian Air Force. He coined it for them when he was part of the force.
'Dreams will be high,
The future is nigh,
Have your goal in sight,
And never give up without a fight!'
yes i know thats true
ReplyDeletedonno wht i was thinking the other day so penned it down
I know you didnt know me when you wrote ths poem , but every word related to me !!! I wonder how you wrote ths ???
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