Wednesday, October 07, 2009

166.Yesterday's tear ,Tommorow's fear..




Waking up at Noontide,
I  think  of life  as  a  roller coaster ride.
Up and down,it goes  round ,
Round and Round without any bound.

Up it  goes,
Life's good times it shows,
When friends were not foes,
Melancholous tears apart.

I   lay  awake,eyes wide   open,
 Still chasing  those desirious  dreams.
Reminiscing,I  look    at   the  stunning   sun,
with  rays of   hopes it  evokes.

I  recall  those  days   of rain,
thinking of    which  gives  me   pain.
Joy,my enemy.
Sorrow,my best friend.                            
                                                                                                                                              
Yesterday's mess ,
is  today's stress.
 bad  I feel,
sad i am

hoping against hopes,
to change tears to smile.
is what i wish,
today and tommorow



Submitted for One Single Impression prompt: descent.  This is my first poem after 9 months.I really don't know how it has turned up.Waiting for your comments

34 comments:

  1. I hope you are able to realize your dreams!

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  2. u know i loved it so very much !! kinda song :)

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  3. i told u before also that i loved it...it was amazing...and specially when the poem comes from my story king :P

    n yes the most important part was..we all have the shares of dissapointements in life..so i am sure every1 will relate to this poem...keep writing :)

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  4. you told me once you wish to go back to poem writing... and here you are...

    nice Solitary Writer...keep up!

    :)

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  5. Its nice...a "roller coaster" poem!
    interesting! :)

    Scribblers Inc.

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  6. It's beautiful.. coz most of us are going through all these emotions deep down.. a roller coaster ride of mixed emotions- tears n fear..
    A common wind blowing across everyone's heart!
    Very well written Ste.. lookin forward to more of these :)

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  7. heyyyyyy....stibumama...kill u for the stupid suspense...i told u its wonderful..painful..but deep and well written..n u called it crappy...wait till i c u online....
    hmmmm....now i get it....!
    a good one without doubt...
    u write wonderful poetry stibumama...so continue writing!
    take care!
    god bless!

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  8. nice.. liked the title and these lines..
    "hoping against hopes,
    to change tears to smile."

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  9. Faded hope is what keeps everyone of us going...for ever and ever....

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  10. hi STE how are you dear??
    missed coming to you since a long time....will try n be regular now..!!

    as of the post...sweet and nice....you are writing a poem after 9 months...??? good yaar...and you are a wonderful writer...!!!

    it was nice..!!!

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  11. a deep descent indeed
    may tears change to a smile ~

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  12. dark nights of the soul sometimes feel lice an icelandic night.

    may you befriend neutrality and joy as well.

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  13. Interesting blog, glad I found it, will be back for sure!!!

    Brahm
    http://alfredliveshere.blogspot.com

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  14. really beautiful work...
    keep it up
    n nice picture too :)

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  15. This is emotional and heartfelt. I think we can all relate to the feelings in this piece and it resonates with the reader. I'm happy you are writing. P.S., I really like your banner on your blog : )

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  16. "Yesterday's mess ,
    is today's stress.
    bad I feel,
    sad i am" How true!

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  17. parzi

    thanks to u for title :)
    hehe glad that u like it

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  18. m good yamini :)

    i m glad u like it thank u

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  19. thank u brahm will check ur blog soon

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  20. write girl

    thanks a lot

    i m glad u love my header

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  21. thank u evry one fr the beautiful comments!!

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  22. Glad I visited your blog ! The poem is nice..I loved it felt good reading it..

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