She locked all doors and walked out into the dark streets as usual. None of those who met her in the dark saw the ebony tears of mascara she shed each night.
But today was her day with her prince.
“I love you.”
“Love you too honey.” Her first night of love.
But today was her day with her prince.
“I love you.”
“Love you too honey.” Her first night of love.
Words - 52
PS - Actually wrote this for the contest at The Colors Magazine
This is my first 55 word fiction.Comments and Suggestions are welcomed .
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awesome!! :)
i dint get it only :(
:( :) :|
Good one :)
I think you can do better than this :)
Good one! :)
thank u nayana
shreya u need to re read time nd again
lazy ams kya hua re
thank u mahesh..i m nt used to 55f
thank u dhanyaa
thanks a lot guys
This is really your first 55 fiction? And you are nominated for avant grande best 55 er award!!! Congrats!! And best of luck!
I didn't understand :(
Nice one. :)
gud try..
could have been better :)
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I don't want to say anything
I don't want to put anything down
U may find it funny and smile
U may find it weird and frown
I don't want to lie
I don't want to be true
So whatever u want to think
I leave up to u..........