Saturday, June 18, 2011

Mermaid's sorrow

A beautiful mermaid,
lonely swimming in an ocean
had a dream to meet 
the most handsome man on Earth.

Everyday she would pop out  ,
to get a glance of  this  smart guy.
who  would swim all across the ocean
devoid of this pretty angel watching him within .

Deep within the sea,
the mermaid would yearn to meet him.
She would watch him everyday
at the same hour,same time.

She loved him,she liked him.
One day the guy saw her,
silently watching him.
He chased her beneath the sea.

Scared and Frightened,
within a swift of a second,
She plunged to her home
He followed her from behind .

finally her  dream came true,
when he met her 
She smiled at him,
He smiled at her.

she loved him,she liked him,
Deep within the ocean,
They both swam towards their destiny
the mermaids  happiness grew no bounds 

Little did she knew 
that he was a human,
and she was a mermaid.
he drowned to death.

She cried ,she wept,
She was afraid of  being alone,
Having lost her love,
She killed herself

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  1. now this one was really nice <3

  2. You've always been one of my favorite bloggers. Love to read your work, Chacha Nehru :)

  3. Triton: 'He's a human. You are a mermaid.'
    Ariel: 'I dont care.'
    >>>The Little Mermaid.

  4. I liked this one. Beautifully written.

  5. Vinie that was too sweet of you and you have always been my favourite one for sure :)

  6. but arent mermaids immortal or live fr 300 yrs or sumthin?
    anyway nice poem.
    i liked d line- she loved him, she liked him- its cute :)

  7. WEhy Do most of the tragedies and story ends in death..??

    nicely written..

  8. Do I really need to tell that "I loved this poem"?

    Superb :)