Morning Blues

Sunday, October 30, 2011 15 Comments A+ a-


In the Morning to Work today,
I saw the traffic go morose.
I wish I could move ,
in a swift,away.


The Cars,they honk a musical honk,
a headache it triggers,
in this mindboggling traffic,
slowly I drift away.


Looking at the watch go tik tok tik
i smile at  my own plight
Never again shall I be late,
the traffic that I hate.

I look at the traffic light,
waiting  for the red to go green,
never did it happened,
nor my car moved.

I honked the horns,
they all saw me go berserk,
crazy and weird,
they all  called me.

Looking at the watch go tik tok  tik,
the light showed green from red,
Lord finally heard my prayers,
The traffic moved once again.



***This has been written for Magpie Tales 88***
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Vinati
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30 October 2011 at 02:11 delete

A smart poetry! :)

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Leo
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30 October 2011 at 10:20 delete

Yes, very smart and beautiful words!

Esp. I love the opening to verses ;) :P

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30 October 2011 at 11:41 delete

Traffic and the headaches it gives!

Nice post :)

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30 October 2011 at 13:32 delete

i see..had no idea u wrote poems too and that too so well. liked it but c'mon cheer up..kick away those blues :D


sarah

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30 October 2011 at 14:23 delete

a beautiful poetry and wise choice of words..

Someone is Special

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Cяystal
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30 October 2011 at 14:30 delete

Never felt the cars could go musically honking .. maybe cos I was too frustrated with th traffic ! :D
But a good choice of words. Me likeyy!

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Kitty
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30 October 2011 at 14:32 delete

Morning blue- especially Traffic ! it makes you mad n sick while you are in hurry ...nicely expressed in the form of poem ! :)

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Andy
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30 October 2011 at 15:11 delete

Hello.
Visiting from the group Blogger by Passion.

Traffic can do that to you when you're in a hurry.

Nicely done!
Thanks for sharing.

The Beautiful Winds Of India

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Ruchi Jain
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30 October 2011 at 18:28 delete

nice way of writing..

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suvaiba
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31 October 2011 at 23:05 delete

soooo manyy posssttt...!
are you some SUPER WRITER :O
omg my dashboard was filled
and nice and lovely lines..! :)

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TigerEyes2001
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1 November 2011 at 00:40 delete

Very nice :) and I like the one in your comment box, too!
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PeeVee™
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2 November 2011 at 16:57 delete

Don't we all have traffic nightmares
-_-

Good one:)

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Ph_
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4 November 2011 at 16:51 delete

Cool :)
Nice blog.

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Maha.Sarwar
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20 November 2011 at 22:21 delete

The only thing that made me go for you blog is. You can make a person smile in deep sorrows too :) A very nice one.:)

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