Haunted by Love

Monday, November 21, 2011 21 Comments A+ a-


This is the photo prompt for Magpie Tales this week.



She haunts me in my dreams,
Every night, She knocks
my door,thinking I am
always there for her.
 

Her eyes mesmerizing,
Seductive lips and
alluring face,every night
She smiles at me.
 
Our lips lock,we
Swirl our body together.
Caressing her cheeks,I
kiss her nape.

No words to define,
her beauty what means.
Every night I close,
my eyes and dream.

She vanishes away,
Leaving me like a fish,
floundering on land, and
a bird with wings destroyed.

I want her now,
for I have been loving,
and loving life,
with and without her.

My eyes open,it hurts
the smile, disappears.
Oh Love! where are thee
Come back once again
 

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Nimue
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21 November 2011 at 14:16 delete

i really liked this one :) sweet and sad ...

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Dave King
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21 November 2011 at 17:23 delete

Scrumptious! Super write.

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21 November 2011 at 19:34 delete

awesome... it is indeed a combination of sweetness and sadness... love it!

have a great week ahead!

JJRod'z

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21 November 2011 at 19:51 delete

"and loving life, with and without her."

I loved the read! :)

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Brian Miller
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21 November 2011 at 19:53 delete

oh man this is one dream i do not want to wake up from and feel the angst of having to....

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pspacer11
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21 November 2011 at 20:38 delete

"A bird with wings destroyed"

That line was like a clean hit to the solar plexus with a sledgehammer.

I always enjoy reading pieces that can arouse such emotions, so I guess you might say I enjoyed this one ;-)

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22 November 2011 at 01:41 delete

Let it come back once again... Beautiful, romantic and no one can define how beautiful a girl is, particularly her eyes..

Someone is Special

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Mishi
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22 November 2011 at 03:58 delete

WOW..this is so sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet Stphe..Loved every word of it:-)

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Carrie Burtt
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22 November 2011 at 05:17 delete

A beautiful piece of writing!
:-)

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Saru Singhal
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22 November 2011 at 08:33 delete

A beautiful poem, I like the way you said left me like a fish.

Lovely poem...

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Isabel Doyle
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22 November 2011 at 10:17 delete

like a fish and a wingless bird!

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Cad
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22 November 2011 at 12:36 delete

A fish out of water, than, this kind of love...

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Vinati
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22 November 2011 at 17:35 delete

Achi kavita likhi hai sir!! :)

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22 November 2011 at 21:25 delete

Never let go of dreams of true love for one day they just may come true. Beautiful piece.

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23 November 2011 at 11:02 delete

And u r reallyyyyy good with poetry I must say..this was so beautifully penned :)


sarah

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Jinksy
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23 November 2011 at 20:36 delete

Aah... dreams... *smiles*

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keith hillman
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25 November 2011 at 06:59 delete

Bitter sweet and utterly delightful.

http://keithsramblings.blogspot.com/2011/11/out-there-in-blogland-is-site-for.html

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zongrik
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27 November 2011 at 06:00 delete

Leaving me like a fish,
floundering on land, and
a bird with wings destroyed.


not a good state to be in...

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