The Moment

Saturday, December 10, 2011 9 Comments A+ a-

 
'Man,She is dressed in wine red,' Ramesh Smiled.
'I saw her...Infact she was gorgeous today...is it her birthday ?,' Suresh asked him.

Its a natural phenomenon that when a guy meets a beautiful girl he rather wants to talk her. But this is the story of  two friends Suresh and Ramesh.They both fell for the same girl.One liked her and the other loved her. She was Esha,the main hearthrob for all the guys in the Office.It seemed like she was the  last beautiful girl who worked in InfoSystems India.

'No ..her birthday is on April 1,'
'Ahh,she must be a beautiful fool then..,' Suresh winked at him.

They both loved her but never had the guts to confess their love to her. But today they had decided to propose her.

'Flip the coin man,' Suresh said
'for what..' Ramesh was curious to know more.

'This is the day...lets see if its you or me...,' Suresh became serious.
'No need..I will go first,' Ramesh told.


He went close to her.
'I am a kind of person who has this unique tendency to make people laugh and I am sure I will make you smile everyday and we will cherish each moment of out life together. I am made for you. You are the most beautiful girl I've ever met on Earth..I LIKE you!' He handed her the red rose he got for her.

'Awaiting a positive response,' He smiled and left.

It was Suresh's turn.
'I am a kind of person who has this unique tendency to make people laugh and I am sure I will make you smile everyday and we will cherish each moment of out life together. I am made for you. You are the most beautiful girl I've ever met on Earth..I LOVE you!' He handed her the red rose he got for her.

'Awaiting a positive respone,' He smiled and ran away.

Esha was confused about the things happening around her. She called for both of them.

'You both are awesome guys.you both have been best friends.You are too good and obviously you both are talented,'  She said.

'Yeah...we are,' The guys said in Unison.

'and its a decisive moment right now..now you guys tell me what do I do...' She added.

'One  of you Loves me and the other Likes me...thats sweet but ...' Her face turned sad

'But..whaaaattt....' They both said .

'But ...' She took a deep breath.

'Mummaaaaaa.....I won the beauty contest,' A girl of around 18 came running towards to her.

'So you still Like me Ramesh!,' Esha said.

'So you still Love me Suresh!,' Esha said and her daughter started laughing.



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11 December 2011 at 07:56 delete

reminds me of santoor ad of late 90's. gud one. Still curious if she had to pick wud she have picked the one how liked her or loved her.

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PeeVee™
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11 December 2011 at 15:03 delete

^Exactly, the Santoor ad:D

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Simran
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11 December 2011 at 15:36 delete

hahah..
santoor santoor..
Nice one

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Mirage
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11 December 2011 at 18:37 delete

I second all those who say SANTOOR for this post!! :D

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ViDiShA
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12 December 2011 at 15:27 delete

Vry grt frnds...nice

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ViDiShA
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12 December 2011 at 15:27 delete

Vry grt frnds...nice

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Tanvi
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14 December 2011 at 03:51 delete

Hehehe :D Dude that was first very gripping for my story oriented mind and then boom :D Nice one :)

Long time!
Cheers,

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Sh@s
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15 December 2011 at 22:57 delete

lol....fits well for a santoor ad as someone already pointed it out in the previous comment.

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Neha
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26 December 2011 at 16:47 delete

Reminded me of those soap ads...I would have loved to know the guys' response :)

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