Tuesday, April 10, 2012

Take me with you!


My heart beat races,
everytime when I talk to you.
I feel you,miss you,
when I think of you.
I realize I have changed,
for  I have fallen for you.
I dream of togetherness,
to live a life  with you.
now that I have fallen for you,
you are everything for me.
I like listening to you ,
for I love to hear you more.
I look at your eyes,
for your eyes amaze me.
your every feature attracts me,
makes me want to feel you.
My heart pounds,
Whenever I look at you.
This feeling is strong,
your charm haunts me.
for I am afraid,
I am losing myself to you.
Everyday I am thinking of you,
Dreaming of you,
I see stars during day.
My heart hurts,
when I don't see you.
for life with you,
will be treat for me.
I miss you every,
single minute I don't talk to you.
I wish to talk more,
accept my love,
Take me with you.


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17 comments:

  1. "My heart pounds,
    Whenever I look at you.
    This feeling is strong,
    your charm haunts me.
    for I am afraid,
    I am losing myself to you."
    Loved these lines :)

    Regards
    village girl

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  2. beautifully penned, touching and pretty relevant too. u want to spend every single moment of ur time with d one you love :)

    sarah

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  3. It is such a dream..to run away with the one we want..we love..hope it happens! (although sometimes the dream proves better than reality) Jae

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  4. Lovely and it takes the reader on a swift flow of emotions.

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  5. Beautiful! Was swept by it. And its so true. I have felt the myriad of emotions when in love. Loved it totally.

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  6. Saru.
    It was a scribble actually..i never thought it would turn out meaningful..its a flow of emotions

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  7. Jenny,
    One who is in love, knows it better..Enough said!

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  8. Thanks a lot everyone for the feedback ! Much Appreciated!

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