Wednesday, April 03, 2013

The Kiss!




Their lips locked.
"Probably this would be our last kiss," he said.
"Why?"

"I am planning to break up."
"Then will you kiss me again.”
He kissed her; she pressed the trigger.
"April Fool!”  He handed her the red rose and diamond ring. She cried as he closed his eyes for the last time.



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19 comments:

  1. omg the don lady makes a fool of herself by killin her "attepting to fool" lover on april fool's day!!!...nice one...:)

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  2. Oh well she didn't love him & he died happy, she never rejected the proposal :P

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  3. jealousy, pessimism, tragic

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  4. So, she was planning to kill him anyway?

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    1. She wasn't but his joke provoked her....possessive

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  5. Kitna cliche tha Stephen...lolz...good job as 55 word fiction!

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  6. :/ where are the happy endings??????? no pun intended

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    1. Happy endings are many but you need to explore this place well... you will surely find the happy endings ;)

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  7. nice..not a happy ending still interesting

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