Saturday, March 15, 2014

Birthday Plan!


 This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.





"Why can't manage your own stuffs?" she asked, cleaning the table.
"Look at those cakes, earring and your mobile phone lying there."  She added.
“Where is the other one?” She said, pointing at the earring.
"Eat the cake, Mom.”
“But why?”
“It’s your birthday today!”  
Tears welled in her eyes. “Uff! This memory loss.”



10 comments:

  1. It is good.. fully gratifies the pic prompt as well your 55 word fiction. Good to read!

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  2. Hey this s a gud one! What i cudnt convey in a full length story, u wrote it so brilliantly in jst 1 paragraph. Loved it :-)

    http://swathishenoy.blogspot.in/2014/03/lucky-stars-write-over-weekend-1.html?m=1

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  3. Aw, this is lovely, short and touching.

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  4. Wow.. Nice. Short and strikingly beautiful.

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  5. Beautiful story... Well written...

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