Wednesday, April 13, 2016

K - Kissed #AtoZChallenge




He grabbed her so close that he could feel her breath.
Their lips locked.  

"Stop it!" She agitated.
He kissed her avidly.
 "I love you!" he whispered.
"I know!" she said.
He stood there speechless.
"Then why all this?" he asked.

“I don’t know,” she said, "I've lost trust in you!"
“But why?” he asked.
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She doesn't trusts him. What should he do to gain back his lost trust? Write on the comment section.

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29 comments:

  1. Trust's important in a relationship. He must know how to bring it back, I think he does. ;)

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  2. He has his own way of loving her which she doesn't seem to understand??

    http://seeya-sk.blogspot.com/2016/04/be-jealous.html

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  3. This story is going to throw some really harsh challenges on him, I guess. ;)

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  4. Aww.... Now what :D
    Great going.... Mr. Artist, now your agnipariksha :P



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  5. Aww.... Now what :D
    Great going.... Mr. Artist, now your agnipariksha :P



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  6. He kissed her! despite of her refusal! "stop it" Wow! WTH is wrong here :O
    Everyone in the comment section is like "aww" & "he has his own way of loving her"
    NO ONE sees that this is NOT a consented kiss!
    Damn! Hope she acknowledge the irony and dump the annoying jerk.

    Good story line, though.
    Keep it going.

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  7. Aww, what does she want? He will convince her eventually I feel!
    Cheers
    @KalaRavi16 from
    Relax-N-Rave

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  8. Looks like they need to sit together and really talk!

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  9. Now what? I hope they get on the same page!

    Cheers!
    Modern Gypsy

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    1. Haha an angry gf was kissed ...
      Intresting move in the story



      @dixita011 from
      Cafenined words

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    2. Haha an angry gf was kissed ...
      Intresting move in the story



      @dixita011 from
      Cafenined words

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  10. Loss of trust is not a good thing to happen in love.
    Time to talk it out peacefully.

    @theerailivedin from The Era I Lived In

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  11. Trust is the most important thing in a relationship. He must spend more time with her.

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  12. Trust is difficult if not impossible to re-earn! It only comes from time and continued effort.

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    1. Yes sadly she shd take some time for herself!

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  13. He can gain her trust by listening to her.

    ~Ninja Minion Patricia Lynne aka Patricia Josephine~
    Story Dam
    Patricia Lynne, Indie Author

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  14. I really wish she would trust him. Just by herself. You can't force someone to trust you.

    Cheers,
    Deepa
    Deepa’s Kaleidoscope

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    1. Well said. We can't force someone to trust

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