Saturday, April 02, 2016

B - The Eye of the Beholder #AtoZChallenge



Continued from the Art attack 


“Don’t you know I hate tears?” he said.
“Tears of joy!” she said, “Am I really this pretty? Be Honest.”
“Yes!”
“Naah, I’m ugly.” she riposted.
 “You’re a princess!” 
“Don’t be so kind.”
“You should know that beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder.”
She smiled.
“Can I ask you something?” he asked.
“What?”
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Read next part  - Can I? 

What do you think he will ask her? Write it in the comments section and let's see what actually he asks her? :D 

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100 comments:

  1. You could ask her is u can declare that you are the one who beholds her?
    Enjoyed reading your post!

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    1. Yes but you should come and see that tomorrow :D

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  2. Ahan :D Totally different from what I had expected. It's cute :)

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  3. Interesting. Waiting to see how this one goes :)

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    1. Hope this will come good. Wait for tomorrow

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  4. Will you return the favor and sketch me?

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  5. Will you return the favor and sketch me?

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  6. Aha! Tears of joy! But now what is on his mind?

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  7. you really know how to keep the readers engaged!! Now I am curious again :D

    Visiting from A to Z Challenge
    Pam's Unconventional Alliance Team
    A Whimsical Medley
    Twinkle Eyed Traveller

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  8. What is your birth sign? Is this the next question he asks her?

    Very interesting story.....can't wait to see where it goes

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    1. Haha yes that's a nice question but you should wait for Monday to know what he actually asked :D

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  9. You have me hooked! Love the animation! Waiting for C next....cheers :)
    @KalaRavi16 from
    Relax-N-Rave

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    1. Thanks Kala :D I am happy that you liked it

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  10. Very engaging and yeah...I'd come back tomorrow to see what he asks.

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  11. I totally get the feeling when one sees their portrait and the joy it feels...
    waiting for next :)

    Cheers
    Geets

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    1. Isn't than an amazing feeling, Geets :D

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  12. Love the creativity that's going into this.. :) I'm hooked!

    Seena from
    Thinking Aloud

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    1. :D :) Thanks These are my attempts to get rid of the stress that gets created due to unrealistic deadlines

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  13. I wasn't expecting tears of joy! Now I want to know what happens next!
    Modern Gypsy

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    1. For that you have to wait till Monday :)

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  14. Interesting! I have to wait till Monday to know what comes next....
    @yenforblue from
    Spice of Life!

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  15. Next time you draw me please make me look more ample in the breast department .
    @Daisy from
    Daisyinthe willows

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  16. Ah!! Thank god my guess was wrong! He didn't make her fat! No more guesses!! will wait till Monday.

    Shubhangi @ The Little Princess

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    1. Yes but you can guess what would happen next :D Thanks

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  17. I'm loving the graphics and the story around it and ofcourse the engagement part which you are running like a daily soap.... :D Goodluck!! :)

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    1. Haha yes sometimes when creativity crosses the threshold then this is what happens though I squeezed some time from here and there to create all that ;)

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  18. My guess for the question:
    He asked: Kya aap Fair & Lovely use karti hain? Agar nahi karti to karna start kar dijiye.. :D :P

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  19. I always think every story has a beautiful ending & so does tis.
    http://jindalpackers.com/blog/quality-packing/

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  20. We girls always say that, just to make sure we don't sound too vain :p
    Waiting for tomorrow's post!

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  21. Oh.. i thought his painting will be humorous enough but okays. Am guessing that he will ask her to do his project or any other no romantic thing, let's see :P
    Waiting for tomorrow :)

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  22. I will wait for tomorrow's post instead of guessing :)


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    1. Yes , Monday will tell what he said. Thanks for coming

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  23. I will wait for tomorrow's post instead of guessing :)


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  24. Hmm..... "Why you always wear a serious look on your face even while complementing?"

    Some brilliant stuff Ste! Keep it up :)

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  25. I am presuming there is going to be a twist...
    I will be waiting to see what happens next! :)

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    1. :) Visit back on Monday to know what happens next :D

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  26. Loving the very creative, realistic scenes. You are an artist creating beautiful visual stories with your words taking them to a whole new level.
    Keep up the good work!

    My Era @theerailivedin
    The Era I Lived In

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    1. Thank you so much mam :) for your kind words

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  27. Tears of joy? Nice.. let us see how the story proceeds.

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  28. This is so bad! Now, what did she ask???
    Offo!! :)
    Love how the series is coming up!

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  29. Ah! those moments of doubts and insecurity in the bunch from Venus. Curious about the question, can't guess this time... :D

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    1. You can still make a random wild guess :);)

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  30. Keeping me hooked up. He probably asks her to marry him 😁😜

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    1. Haha now that's a nice guess :D let's see on Monday

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  31. If others think you are beautiful also, doesn't that mean something?

    Transformed Nonconformist

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  32. He asks.. 'Can you bring me a beer?'
    she says 'What?!?'
    He replies 'I meant to say earlier that 'beauty is in the eye of the beerholder' and I could really use a beer about now'

    Mary
    Twitter: @KnottyMarie
    Literary Gold
    Jingle Jangle Jungle

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    1. Haha that was very creative.. Beerholder :D

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  33. I think she'll want to know exactly why he finds her attractive. Fishing for more complements seems like the typical next question in a conversation like this!

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    1. Yes but he is asking not her ..let's see what he is going to ask on Monday :) thanks

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  34. She might ask a silly question? Seriously no guess here. Will come back to tomorrow:)


    Please visit:
    http://livetolovelifecrazy.blogspot.com/

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    1. Haha OK he asked ... Bt will love to see you back on Monday :)

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  35. Oh it's getting curious day by day! Waiting for the next part!

    Nibha @ Expressions
    Bruises Of the Past

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    1. I'm glad you like it:) see you on Monday

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  36. Since it maybe C related, I think the question will be "Do I resemble a CELEBRITY" or something like that :)

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  37. Can't wait to know what he will ask her.

    Bhavya
    Visiting From Ishithaa
    #AtoZChallenge2016

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    1. Now you get to know what he asked through the C post :)

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  38. "Why aren't you nicer to yourself?" It's what I'm wondering, anyway!

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  39. Well, the very first line just reminded me of Rajesh Khanna's famous dialogue : "Pushpa, I hate tears re!"

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  40. Hehe, on a lighter note, because beauty lies in his eyes, she will ask him the power of his spectacles........

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  41. Am enjoying these posts :) Keep them coming.

    http://totallyinternalreflections.blogspot.sg/

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    1. Im so thrilled to know that you like it. :) Thanks for the kind words mam

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  42. Do those shades, you are wearing have a number???

    @w0rds4u from As Time Flies

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  43. Do those shades, you are wearing have a number???

    @w0rds4u from As Time Flies

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  44. How can someone be so beautiful? :P (I know that sounds like one of the cheesiest pick up lines ;))

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    1. I had a similar plan while writing it then changed it ;)

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  45. Ok, so she's emotional because it's a very pretty portrait. And you are good at this... making sure we move to the next post :)

    --Nimi
    www.NimiArora.com

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  46. A cute love story. You know, how to spice it up:)

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  47. Ooooh boy, this seems so creepy! A couple I know seems to be the exact same thing in real life! I read your P-T first and then started back at A. But it looks feels so familiar, its giving me goosebumps!

    Cheers,
    Deepa
    Deepa’s Kaleidoscope

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    1. You should share this series with the couple that you know :D Lets see if they agree too

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