Continued from A Hate Story
"I had been wasting my time with an idiot like you," she said.
“An idiot for whom his ridiculous art is more important than a woman who loves him,” she added, “But now love is gone.”
“It’s not gone, it’s omnipresent,” he said, jokingly.
“No!” She said.
“I hope I’m hallucinating,” he said.
“What you think?”
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quite interesting turn :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Shalu
DeleteThe story is taking a dangerous turn with the boy upsetting the girl. I think the fight is going to heat up in next few episodes.
ReplyDeleteYes, you are absolutely right
DeleteI don't think the boy's love is being properly conveyed...he's just assuming he has! Oh dear, I foresee tough times ahead!
ReplyDelete@KalaRavi16 from
Relax-N-Rave
Thanks Kala :)
DeleteMen and women do not think alike on the same situation.. hence they are both right in their own terms but actually they do not compliment each other.. hence the fights.. interesting turn here.. hope to catch the entire story by the time the challenge ends.. :)
ReplyDeletehttp://serendipityofdreams.blogspot.in/2016/04/into-woods.html
Thats a very in depth comment :D Thanks Deepti
DeleteHawwww
ReplyDeleteThis boy is aggressive now 😒
Waiting for next turn...
@dixita011 from
Cafenined words
Haha:D Thanks
DeleteCommunication gap, huh? As usual the boy isn't communicating effectively ;-)
ReplyDeleteCheers!
Modern Gypsy
Boy will bounce back ;)
DeleteHe does knows how to irk her ;) tempers flaring :)
ReplyDeleteHaha :D He surely knows that
DeleteDifficult times ahead. He doesn't know how to express! Oh, boy.
ReplyDeleteYou should give him tip :P
DeleteQuite interesting. Let me see what's in store. looking forward :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Meera:)
Deleteeven I hope he is hallucinating :P
ReplyDeleteYes poor guy! :D
DeleteHe isn't communicating properly?
ReplyDeletehttp://seeya-sk.blogspot.com/2016/04/free-write.html
http://seeya-sk.blogspot.com/2016/04/horrible-husband.html
Yes he should no?
DeleteSeriously this guy is showing too much attitude! Getting on my nerves!
ReplyDeleteTina from
Twinkling Tina Cooks
The Sunny Side of Life
How do you get the illustrations so correct? Are you creating them? Or is it a software?
ReplyDeleteMay be he took her for granted. All this time she might have kept quiet and now when she is actually speaking out her mind, he can't believe that it is true and hence he hopes that he is hallucinating.
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